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MY OPINION ABOUT THE BOY WHO DIVORCED HIS PARENTS

    I think the judge should not allow Gregory to divorce his mother for three reasons.  First, Gregory, who is 12 years old, is not an adult.  So, he is still too young to decide it.  The Second reason is his mother loves him very much.  Although she thought it would be better for Gregory to live with a foster family that never wanted him to be away from her.  Now, she is trying to become a responsible parent.  The  finally reason is natural family is very important for everybody.  Kingsley’s lawyer says that the rights of a natural family to remain together are stronger than the rights of a foster family.  I believe his mother is going to change in future.  So, the judge should not allow Gregory to divorce his mother.